Do you enjoy preparing things for a celebration? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I\'m the type of person who enjoys preparing things for a celebration.
Because I like to surprise others and I feel better when I see them surprised or like them. Especially, I like to prepare a commenorative cake or gift sensibly, and I think I\'m person who personally like that when I find an interesting design or gift, dopamine is formed.
강사 첨삭
Hi!
Thank you so much for submitting your answer.
It was nice to know that you truly enjoy preparing for special celebrations. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
I think I\'m the type of person who enjoys preparing things for a celebration.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I think I\'m the kind of person who finds joy in organizing special events.
Because I like to surprise others and I feel better when I see them surprised or like them.
>> CORRECT.
*** (It is better to just connect the reason with the first sentence.)
>> I think I\'m the kind of person who finds joy in organizing special events because I like to surprise others and I feel better when I see them surprised or like them.
Especially, I like to prepare a commenorative cake or gift sensibly, and I think I\'m person who personally like that when I find an interesting design or gift, dopamine is formed.
>> Especially, I like to prepare a commemorative cake or gift sensibly, and I think I\'m a person who personally like that when I find an interesting design or gift, dopamine is formed.
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