Do you enjoy saying other people\'s place?
학생이 쓴 원문
Staying at one\'s place happens between close relationships, like best friends, so that issue always make me exciting. However, staying over other\'s place is very unoften issue for me unless I visit my hometown, \"Deagu\".
When I visit my hometown, my friends gather into a friend\'s home who lives on herself. And over a hole night, we share our stories, having foods, dancing, or watching TV. Therefore, I\'ll renew this words meaning as save everything and doing it in a day or night. I think it couldn\'t be not exiting if you syay over your best friends\' place.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jessie! T[이름]k you for this. I used to do sleepovers when I was in high school, but those days are long gone.
- T. Beth
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Staying at one\'s place happens between close relationships, like best friends, so that issue always make me exciting. >>>> OR: Staying at one\'s place happens between close relationships, like best friends, so that always make me excited.
However, staying over other\'s place is very unoften issue for me unless I visit my hometown, \"Deagu\".
>>>> However, I rarely stay over other\'s place unless I visit my hometown, \"Deagu\".
When I visit my hometown, my friends gather into a friend\'s home who lives on herself.
>>>> When I visit my hometown, my friends gather together at a friend\'s home who lives by herself.
And over a hole night, we share our stories, having foods, dancing, or watching TV.
>>>> And for the whole night, we are sharing our stories, having foods, dancing, or watching TV.
Therefore, I\'ll renew this words meaning as save everything and doing it in a day or night.
>>>> Therefore, I\'ll renew this words meaning as saving everything and doing it all in a day or night.
I think it couldn\'t be not exiting if you syay over your best friends\' place.
>>>> I think it couldn\'t be not exciting if you stay over your best friends\' place.
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