Do you enjoy seasonal foods? Which food do you look forward to each year?

2020-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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Due to global warming and food development, we are enjoying food regardless of the season. We can always eat fruits and vegetables even in winter, and fish can be purchased without difficulty due to the development of aquaculture. We go to the strawberry field even in the snowy winter Also, if we want to eat fish, we go to fish farms. We can get what we want anywhere, anytime. So we don\'t have to expect. However, specialties are expected to be purchased for visited there. It is good to buy fresh food if we find a place where such food is produced. I like crabs, and when spring comes, I leave for the East Sea. The blue crab is really delicious. I am waiting for next year.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]! Technology had been helping humans to have convenience. As you mentioned, food production has greatly improved. There are more developments needed but we getting there. I hope you could taste crab again next year. Have a good day!~~T.Dee

Due to global warming and food development, we are enjoying food regardless of the season.
>>CORRECT!
We can always eat fruits and vegetables even in winter, and fish can be purchased without difficulty due to the development of aquaculture.
>>CORRECT!
We go to the strawberry field even in the snowy winter
>>We go to the strawberry fields even in the snowy winter.
Also, if we want to eat fish, we go to fish farms.
>>CORRECT!
We can get what we want anywhere, anytime.
>>CORRECT!
So we don\'t have to expect.
>>We don\'t have to wait for a season.
However, specialties are expected to be purchased for visited there.
>>However, specialties are expected to be purchased when visiting a place.
It is good to buy fresh food if we find a place where such food is produced.
>>CORRECT!
I like crabs, and when spring comes, I leave for the East Sea.
>>CORRECT!
The blue crab is really delicious. I am waiting for next year.
>>The blue crab is really delicious. I am waiting to try it again next year.

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