Do you enjoy shopping for chic clothes? Why or why not?
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I don\'t enjoy shopping for chic clothes.
Because I don\'t know much about clothes and I don\'t like shopping for clothes. Also, I\'m the type to think carefully and buy something. If it\'s a trend these days, I can be interested in it, but I don\'t necessarily buy it. It takes a long time to buy one because I think about whether I really have to buy it of if I really want to buy it, and I compare the price and buy it, so it takes a long time to buy one thing. And I often buy clothes that I like, so I don\'t consider whether it is chic or not.
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I don\'t enjoy shopping for chic clothes.
>> CORRECT.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I\'m not fond of shopping for chic clothes.
Because I don\'t know much about clothes and I don\'t like shopping for clothes.
>> That\'s because I don\'t know much about clothes and I don\'t like shopping for clothes.
Also, I\'m the type to think carefully and buy something.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I’m also a very deliberate shopper.
If it\'s a trend these days, I can be interested in it, but I don\'t necessarily buy it.
>> CORRECT.
It takes a long time to buy one because I think about whether I really have to buy it of if I really want to buy it, and I compare the price and buy it, so it takes a long time to buy one thing.
>> It takes me a long time to make a purchase because I weigh my needs versus my wants, compare prices, and ensure it’s truly necessary.
And I often buy clothes that I like, so I don\'t consider whether it is chic or not.
>> CORRECT.
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