Do you enjoy shopping online?
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Do you enjoy shopping online?
Yes, I prefer to shop online.
It\'s because online prices are much lower than retail prices to buy in person. I am not sure this is also the case in other countries.
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Do you enjoy shopping online?
Yes, I prefer to shop online.
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or>>Yes, I would rather shop online than go to a mall.
It\'s because online prices are much lower than retail prices to buy in person.
>>It\'s because the prices online are much lower than the retail prices, and I have to buy them in person.
I am not sure this is also the case in other countries.
>>I am not sure if this is also the case in other countries.
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