Do you enjoy shopping ? why or why not?
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Do you enjoy shopping ? why or why not?
i like shopping when i have a money.
>> I like shopping when I have money.
but i don\'t like eyeshopping because i feel frustrated when i don\'t have money for buy stylish iteams
>> However, I don\'t like window shopping because I feel frustrated when I don\'t have money to buy stylish items.
i usually like fashion items and most of expense is fashion items so i like shopping and buy at that moment;)
>> I usually like fashionable items, so it\'s what I mostly buy when I have money.
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