Do you enjoy socializing? How is socializing beneficial?
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Hello [이름]. Thank you for his one. Although socializing and being with other people is sometimes necessary, I think we also need to have our \"alone time\" from time to time.
- T. Beth
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I don\'t think that I enjoy socializing.
>>>> CORRECT.
Instead of that. I enjoy by myself reading a book or listening to music.
>>>> Instead, I enjoy being by myself reading a book or listening to music.
But even though I like staying alone, I can not live alone.
>>>> CORRECT.
When I meet people and do somehing together, I feel vigorous and exciting.
>>>> When I meet people and do something together, I feel vigorous and excited.
Through socializing, we can make friends and do intresting activities togher.
>>>> Through socializing, we can make friends and do interesting activities together.
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