Do you enjoy socializing? How is socializing beneficial?

2018-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I don't think that I enjoy socializing. Instead of that. I enjoy by myself reading a book or listening to music. But even though I like staying alone, I can not live alone. When I meet people and do somehing together, I feel vigorous and exciting. Through socializing, we can make friends and do intresting activities togher.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you for his one. Although socializing and being with other people is sometimes necessary, I think we also need to have our \"alone time\" from time to time.

- T. Beth

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I don\'t think that I enjoy socializing.

>>>>  CORRECT.  

Instead of that. I enjoy by myself reading a book or listening to music.

>>>> Instead, I enjoy being by myself reading a book or listening to music.   

But even though I like staying alone, I can not live alone.

>>>>  CORRECT.  

When I meet people and do somehing together, I feel vigorous and exciting.

>>>>  When I meet people and do something together, I feel vigorous and excited.  

Through socializing, we can make friends and do intresting activities togher.

>>>>  Through socializing, we can make friends and do interesting activities together.  

 

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