Do you enjoy traveling? If so, what’s your favorite destination to relax?

2025-04-30 · 첨삭 강사 Lia

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I don\'t like traveling well. Because traveling somewhere is trublesome. However, I fully enjoyed a traveling when I go to somewher for traveling. I like Natrang in Vietnam, because Vietnamese foods are familiar with me.

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Hi [이름]. You\'re doing a great job trying to express both your opinion and personal experience. Make sure to check spelling carefully and use the correct verb tense to describe past events clearly. With a bit more attention to detail and grammar rules, your writing will become much smoother. Keep it up, you\'re on the right path.


~ T. Lia


I don\'t like traveling well.
>> I don’t really like traveling.


Because traveling somewhere is trublesome.
>> Because traveling somewhere is troublesome.


However, I fully enjoyed a traveling when I go to somewher for traveling.
>> However, I fully enjoyed traveling when I went somewhere on a trip.


I like Natrang in Vietnam, because Vietnamese foods are familiar with me.
>> I like Nha Trang in Vietnam because Vietnamese food is familiar to me.

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