Do you enjoy walking around your town or city? Why? Why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to walk up a small mountain nearby.Walking is good for my health, and breathing in fresh air. and, the view from the top is beautiful, and the makgeolli\'s tastes on the top is good.
and then, I can take a nap home because I am drunken. it takes me beatiful place
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]^^
It\'s raining cats and dogs here now in my city and the weather is cool - so comfortable :)
By the way, thank you for your great effort in writing your homework.
Writing Task: Do you enjoy walking around your town or city? Why? Why not?
I like to walk up a small mountain nearby.
>>CORRECT!
OR: I like to walk up a small mountain nearby.
Walking is good for my health, and breathing in fresh air.
>>CORRECT!
and, the view from the top is beautiful, and the makgeolli\'s tastes on the top is good.
>>And the view from above is beautiful, and the taste of \"makgeolli\" above is good.
and then, I can take a nap home because I am drunken. it takes me beatiful place
>>Then, I get drunk and can take a nap at home, which makes me dream of a beautiful place.
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