Do you ever buy things and then think it was a mistake?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I need to buy some things, I like shopping online mall.
It`s convenient and a bit of cheaper .However, purchasing on the internet can be made a mistake.
I have some experience ;when I bough things ,as if vegetables,fruits, fishes,they were not good condition, size, freshness,color,
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
Let\'s be careful of vocabulary.
That\'s the purpose of the writing exercise.
Let\'s be careful and make sure our words are on point.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
When I need to buy some things, I like shopping online mall.
>> When I need to buy some things, I like shopping online.
It`s convenient and a bit of cheaper .
It`s convenient and a bit of cheaper .
>> It\'s convenient and a bit cheaper.
However, purchasing on the internet can be made a mistake.
>> However, we can make a mistake in purchasing on the internet.
I have some experience ;when I bough things ,as if vegetables,fruits, fishes.
I have some experience ;when I bough things ,as if vegetables,fruits, fishes.
>> I had an experience one time when I bought vegetables, fruits and fish.
they were not good condition, size, freshness,color,
>> The quality, size and color were not good.
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