Do you ever dream about being really, really rich?

2019-04-16 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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I have not read \"Crazy Rich Asians\" novel and have not seen the movie, either. When I was a child, I imagined that I would be very rich or a nice person. I used to imagine myself in a nice suit and doing something nice. But now I don\'t think I\'m going to be rich, becuase I\'m not positive or I\'m complacent. I don\'t think I have much ability to make a lot. And I don\'t have much time to think about anything else because I\'m so busy every day.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, [이름]! (^_^) Happy Tuesday!

Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.

I have made some modifications for you to review later on. See you in class.^^

Enjoy the rest of the day!

__T. Mayleen :)


I have not read \"Crazy Rich Asians\" novel and have not seen the movie, either.

>>> I neither have read the \'Crazy Rich Asians\' novel nor have seen the movie.
When I was a child, I imagined that I would be very rich or a nice person.

>>> When I was a child, I imagined that I would either be very rich or a very nice person.

I used to imagine myself in a nice suit and doing something nice.

>>> CORRECT

But now I don\'t think I\'m going to be rich, becuase I\'m not positive or I\'m complacent.

>>> However, I think I\'m not that positive nor complacent that I\'m going to be rich in the future.

I don\'t think I have much ability to make a lot.

>>> CORRECT

And I don\'t have much time to think about anything else because I\'m so busy every day.

>>> Also, I don\'t have much time to think about anything else because I\'m so busy every day.

>>> OR: Also, I don\'t have time to think about anything else because I\'m busy with my every day life.


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