Do you ever feel like you are just wasting your time? What activities do you think are not worth you
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was a student, most of time I used to play the computer game. If I think about it now, it\'s a waste of time. If I couldn\'t do it, for me to make a lot of memories with my important people.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for your answer to this homework, Elic. Nice effort, and thank you as well for sharing something personal. There were just some misplaced words in some sentences, take note of where I placed them in the corrections that I gave. I also added a few words to complete the thought of some sentences. Other than those, you did quite a good job! Keep it up, my bright student! :)
- Teacher Raven
>> When I was a student, I spend most of my time playing computer games.
If I think about it now, it\'s a waste of time.
>> Correct.
If I couldn\'t do it, for me to make a lot of memories with my important people.
>> If I didn\'t do that, I would\'ve made a lot of memories with the important people in my life.
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