Do you ever feel that you waste your free time? How?

2022-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Rina

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I once felt that I was wasting my free time. Recently, the reason is that it has become difficult to play outside due to COVID-19. Before COVID-19, I met with my friends outside and went to many new places. However, due to COVID-19, I sometimes feel frustrated spending my free time at home. Nevertheless, I try to use my free time efficiently. I\'m going to take a rest doing something that helps me.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Hazel!
I felt the same way too! But I want to believe that this pandemic is going to end soon and we can finally spend time with our loved ones. 
Hang in there! ^^

- T. Rina

1. I once felt that I was wasting my free time.
>> CORRECT!

2. Recently, the reason is that it has become difficult to play outside due to COVID-19. 
>> CORRECT!
OR: Recently, COVID-19 is the biggest reason why people find it hard to go outside. 

3. Before COVID-19, I met with my friends outside and went to many new places. 
>> CORRECT!
OR: Before this pandemic started, I often met and hung out with my friends. 

4. However, due to COVID-19, I sometimes feel frustrated spending my free time at home.
>> CORRECT!

5. Nevertheless, I try to use my free time efficiently. 
>> CORRECT!

6. I\'m going to take a rest doing something that helps me.
>> CORRECT!
OR: I\'m going to take a rest while doing something that is useful for me. 

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