Do you ever feel that you waste your free time? How?

2016-12-14 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

I would like to get some rest on the weekends. However, I feel like I wasted my valuate time after spending time on just watching TV, lying down on the couch, and staying at home without doing anything special. Resting is necessary for all of us to get recharged after hard work for the whole week. However, how to rest well is the key to make us feel more refreshed. Looking back on my last days, I cannot say that I have lived my life to the fullest. I have wasted so much time that should have been used for more productive and meaningful things. I somewhat regret now that I should have spent the time more effectively. If I had recognized earlier that time cannot be bought with money, I could have put more effort in to materializing my dreams. As we are getting older, time passes away much faster than when we were younger. Even from now on, I need to manage time effectively so that I won’t regret it later again. Health is the first priority and time is the second important asset.

강사 첨삭

Good evening Sir [이름].
I hope that you will be able to have enough rest this coming weekend.

I know that holidays are coming so we will have a hectic schedule again.

Let us make the most of our time before the Christmas and New Year. ^.^

I appreciate everything that you did in our class.

Our classes everyday are memorable.
See you in class.
Teacher Nina


I would like to get some rest on the weekends.

>> correct

However, I feel like I wasted my valuate time after spending time on just watching TV, lying down on the couch, and staying at home without doing anything special.

>> correct

Resting is necessary for all of us to get recharged after hard work for the whole week.

>> correct 

>> OR: Resting is necessary for all of us to get recharged after working hard for the whole week.

However, how to rest well is the key to make us feel more refreshed.

>> correct

Looking back on my last days, I cannot say that I have lived my life to the fullest.

>> correct

I have wasted so much time that should have been used for more productive and meaningful things.

>> correct

I somewhat regret now that I should have spent the time more effectively.

>> correct

If I had recognized earlier that time cannot be bought with money, I could have put more effort in to materializing my dreams.

>> correct

As we are getting older, time passes away much faster than when we were younger.

>> correct

Even from now on, I need to manage time effectively so that I won’t regret it later again.

>> correct

Health is the first priority and time is the second important asset.

>> correct

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