Do you ever get angry with yourself? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was disapointed to myself, I got angry myself.
especially, About thing that I do my best for work, relationship of people, and study.
But, If I control the emotion, I will be better person someday.
So, Importance is good for me to control the angry to grow up myself.
강사 첨삭
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When I was disapointed to myself, I got angry myself. especially, About thing that I do my best for work, relationship of people, and study.
>> When I am disappointed in myself, I get angry at myself, especially about things that I do my best in, such as work, relationships, and studies.
But, If I control the emotion, I will be better person someday.
>> However, if I control my emotions, I will become a better person someday.
So, Importance is good for me to control the angry to grow up myself.
>> Therefore, it is important for me to control my anger to grow and improve myself.
>> When I am disappointed in myself, I get angry at myself, especially about things that I do my best in, such as work, relationships, and studies.
But, If I control the emotion, I will be better person someday.
>> However, if I control my emotions, I will become a better person someday.
So, Importance is good for me to control the angry to grow up myself.
>> Therefore, it is important for me to control my anger to grow and improve myself.
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