Do you ever get angry with yourself? Why?

2024-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Ryka

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I sometimes get angry to me when I had a mistake repeatdly or something don\'t go well. I believe the anger makes me more strong. Anger is a kind of motivation.

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~~Teacher Ryka^^

I sometimes get angry to me when I had a mistake repeatdly or something don\'t go well.
>>  I sometimes get angry with myself when I repeatedly make mistakes or when things don’t go well.

I believe the anger makes me more strong.
>>  I believe that anger can make me stronger. 

Anger is a kind of motivation.
>> CORRECT
OR >> 
Anger can be a form of motivation.

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