Do you ever get confused with new technology? Give an example.
학생이 쓴 원문
yes , It\'s the Apple phone I use. There are many functions that I don\'t know how to use, There is no need to use them. If want to use them, i have to study them... Headache.
강사 첨삭
Hey Kyle! Thank you for taking time to do the homework right away! You\'ve been doing these more consistently. Keep it up!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
yes , It\'s the Apple phone I use.
>> Yes, it\'s the Apple phone I use.
OR >> Yes, I use an Apple phone.
There are many functions that I don\'t know how to use, There is no need to use them.
>> There are many functions that I don\'t know how to use, and there\'s no need to use them.
OR >> It has many functions that I don\'t know how to use, and I don\'t really need to use them.
If want to use them, i have to study them... Headache.
>> If I want to use them, I have to study them... What a headache.
OR >> If I want to use them, I\'ll need to learn how... It’s quite a hassle.
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