Do you ever hate yourself?

2015-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Yes, I do often hate myself. Now, I am in my fifties. Looking back my life, I'm not satisfied with my life. So, I hate myself. And sometimes I discover evil thigs in my mind, like jealousy. Then, I become hate myself Sometimes I find myself who is hypocritical. Then Iam disgusting myself. But I am trying to find my good pointand love myself. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Ms. [이름]! Thank you for being honest in answering this question. I hope that you will love yourself more and appreciate every good trait that you have. Have a great day! ~Kelly^^ Yes, I do often hate myself. >> Correct.Now, I am in my fifties.>> Correct. Looking back my life, I\'m not satisfied with my life. >> I don\'t feel satisfied as I started looking back on my life.So, I hate myself. >> Correct.And sometimes I discover evil things in my mind, like jealousy. >> Correct.Then, I become hate myself >> Then I start to hate myself.Sometimes I find myself who is hypocritical. >> Sometimes I find myself being hypocritical.Then Iam disgusting myself. >> Then I disgust myself.But I am trying to find my good pointand love myself. >> But I am trying to find my good point and love myself.Thank you. >> Correct.

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