Do you ever hate yourself?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I do often hate myself.
Now, I am in my fifties.
Looking back my life, I'm not satisfied with my life.
So, I hate myself.
And sometimes I discover evil thigs in my mind, like jealousy.
Then, I become hate myself
Sometimes I find myself who is hypocritical.
Then Iam disgusting myself.
But I am trying to find my good pointand love myself.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for being honest in answering this question.
I hope that you will love yourself more and appreciate every good trait that you have.
Have a great day!
~Kelly^^
Yes, I do often hate myself.
>> Correct.Now, I am in my fifties.>> Correct.
Looking back my life, I\'m not satisfied with my life.
>> I don\'t feel satisfied as I started looking back on my life.So, I hate myself.
>> Correct.And sometimes I discover evil things in my mind, like jealousy.
>> Correct.Then, I become hate myself
>> Then I start to hate myself.Sometimes I find myself who is hypocritical.
>> Sometimes I find myself being hypocritical.Then Iam disgusting myself.
>> Then I disgust myself.But I am trying to find my good pointand love myself.
>> But I am trying to find my good point and love myself.Thank you.
>> Correct.
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