Do you ever have “lucid dreams”. In other words, do you ever become aware that you are dreaming and
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It was when I half-slept and half-awoke when I dreamed a lucid dream. I knew that I was dreaming and could control the dream. I met a beautiful girl and could date her as the way I wished. Even after waking up, I could continue the dream and met the same girl. It was possible because I didn’t fall asleep completely. Lucid dreaming is the ability to know you’re dreaming while you’re dreaming. A lucid dreamer is able to go to sleep at night, and wake up within his or her dream. Once lucid, you can explore and even change elements of the dream. You may notice that you’re in a location that would normally be impossible or perhaps you stumble upon something absolutely absurd. Typically, lucid dreams are triggered by some sort of inconsistency, something that suddenly causes the dreamer to stop and question his or her reality. I hope I can have ability to dream as I wish, so I can travel anywhere I want to go and meet someone I really want to meet. How wonderful it would be!
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Wow! I want to have that chance, too Sir [이름]. ^^
I think it will be really great. And I want to meet Lee Min Ho or Kim Su Hyun. ^^ Hihihi.
I want to go to Paris and Korea during winter.
What a wonderful dream. ^^ How about you? Where do you want to go?
Hope to hear your answers in class. See you.
Have a great Friday night.Teacher Nina
It was when I half-slept and half-awoke when I dreamed a lucid dream.
>> Better: It happened when I was half asleep and half awake when I had a lucid dream.
I knew that I was dreaming and could control the dream.
>> correct
I met a beautiful girl and could date her as the way I wished.
>> correct
Even after waking up, I could continue the dream and met the same girl.
>> correct
It was possible because I didn’t fall asleep completely.
>> correct
Lucid dreaming is the ability to know you’re dreaming while you’re dreaming.
>> correct
A lucid dreamer is able to go to sleep at night, and wake up within his or her dream.
>> correct
Once lucid, you can explore and even change elements of the dream.
>> correct
You may notice that you’re in a location that would normally be impossible or perhaps you stumble upon something absolutely absurd.
>> correct
Typically, lucid dreams are triggered by some sort of inconsistency, something that suddenly causes the dreamer to stop and question his or her reality.
>> correct
I hope I can have ability to dream as I wish, so I can travel anywhere I want to go and meet someone I really want to meet.
>> Better: I hope I can have the ability to dream as I wish, so I can travel anywhere I want to go and meet someone I really want.
How wonderful it would be!
>> correct
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