Do you ever shop on the internet? What is your opinion of this way of shopping?

Hi there Sir [이름]!

Happy Thursday. ^^

Yes, you are right.
There are a lot of things that we can do by using the internet.

It is really convenient.

I agree with your ideas.
However, I still sometimes prefer to shop offline

It is because there were times that I bought something online.

And when I receive it, it doesn\'t fit me such as T-shirt or shoes.

And it will take a lot of time for me to receive another stock.

Thank you so much for your time.

See you in class.
Teacher Nina

I sometimes buy things on the internet.

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There are countless number of online market places for almost all the products and e-commerce is changing the world and our lives.

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>> OR: There are countless number of online market places for almost all of the products. And e-commerce is changing the world and our lives.

Online shopping is convenient, time-saving, and actually cheaper than off-line stores.

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Even grocery shopping is done via the internet.

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Almost all the businesses are running online shopping malls these days.

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>> OR: Almost all of the businesses are running online shopping malls these days.

Even for the products like cloths or shoes that you need to try on in person, we go to an offline store, check, and choose the thing and then you buy it at an online store that offers a better deal.

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>> OR: Even for the products like cloths or shoes that you need to try on in person, we go to an offline store, check, and choose the thing. Then, you buy it at an online store that offers a better deal.

Many businesses that only run offline shops and maintain the conventional way of business are actually running out of business.

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Without changing the business model, they cannot survive.

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We are living in digital era.

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Everything is done via the internet.

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Even an internet baking business emerged.

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You don’t have to go to bank to open an account or to withdraw money.

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Doctors can diagnose you via online or smart phones.

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