Do you ever shop on the internet? What is your opinion of this way of shopping?

I frequently shop on the internet. I have recently bought a bicycle, neckless, Bluetooth speakers, sports tapes, etc. Online shopping has been increasing rapidly in Korea. Online shopping sales jumped 21 percent in March from a year earlier on robust sales of clothes and electronic devices. Purchases made through smartphones, tablets and other mobile gadgets also soared 50.6 percent on-year to 2.7 trillion won to account for 51.6 percent of all online sales in February, up slightly from the 51.1 percent share the previous month. Travel packages are well sold online. It is much easier, convenient, cost effective, and time saving. Some customers buy even glossary on the internet. You can get a lot of information about the product you want to buy at your fingertips. Without going to shops on foot, you can compare price and refer to other customer’s reviews at your desk, which can greatly help make a wise purchase decision. However, there are some downsides of online shopping.

Good day to you Sir [이름]! Happy Friday. ^^ Your ideas in writing were marvelous. Keep up the good work. ^^ Thanks for your great participation in class. See you. Teacher Nina   I frequently shop on the internet. >> correct I have recently bought a bicycle, neckless, Bluetooth speakers, sports tapes, etc. >> correct Online shopping has been increasing rapidly in Korea. >> correct Online shopping sales jumped 21 percent in March from a year earlier on robust sales of clothes and electronic devices. >> correct Purchases made through smartphones, tablets and other mobile gadgets also soared 50.6 percent on-year to 2.7 trillion won to account for 51.6 percent of all online sales in February, up slightly from the 51.1 percent share the previous month. >> Better: Purchases made through smartphones, tablets and other mobile gadgets also soared 50.6 percent on-year to 2.7 trillion won to account for 51.6 percent of all the online sales in February, up slightly from the 51.1 percent share from the previous month. Travel packages are well sold online. >> correct It is much easier, convenient, cost effective, and time saving. >> correct Some customers buy even glossary on the internet. >> correct You can get a lot of information about the product you want to buy at your fingertips. >> correct Without going to shops on foot, you can compare price and refer to other customer’s reviews at your desk, which can greatly help make a wise purchase decision. >> correct However, there are some downsides of online shopping. >> correct