Do you ever think about how precious water is? Why is it important?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I had think about how precious water is in the school.
I think it is important because we can\'t live without water we will die fast if we don\'t drink water.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sunny!
I like the fact that I could understand the idea that you wanted to express.
It means that you have a good sense in choosing the right words and expressions.
We are going to work on your skills in sentence construction.
We need to focus on sentence patterns.
Let\'s work hard!
~~ Teacher Sharon
Yes, I had think about how precious water is in the school.
>> Yes, I had thought about how precious water is in school.
I think it is important because we can\'t live without water we will die fast if we don\'t drink water.
I think it is important because we can\'t live without water we will die fast if we don\'t drink water.
>> I think it is important because we can\'t live without water and we will immediately die if we don\'t drink water.
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