Do you ever think about the real meaning of Christmas? Why some people do not like Christmas?

2014-12-29 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Around the world, a lot of people celebrate Christmas each December 25, while many others celebrate the birthday of Jesus Christ on January 7. However, there are also millions who choose not to celebrate Christmas at all. Why? For one thing, they may belong to a religion that is not part of Christendom. They may be of the Jewish, Hindu, or Shinto faith, to name a few. Others, such as atheists, agnostics, or secular humanists, view the Christmas story as a myth. There are also people who are in a difficult situation financially or physically so that where they are not afford emotionally to celebrate or enjoy Christmas. Their family could be in a hospital fighting diseases or they are literally starving. If you or your family is at a risk of dying today or tomorrow, it is miserable to see people on TV or on the street, laughing and smiling. Although I doubt whether I can survive today, the world is going well without me. Nothing will happen in the world even if I do not exist.

강사 첨삭

Good day to you Sir [이름]!

Happy Monday! Today is the last Monday of this year.

Time really flies fast! I can\'t believe that we are going to end the year again.

But of course, I want to say thank you for giving me wonderful year because you are my student.

I can\'t thank you enough for trusting me. I hope that until the end we\'ll be together achieving our goal.

Thanks for your wonderful ideas again.

I agree with you, but let us hope that those misfortunate people can receive something from the government on holidays.

It may not be in terms of money but in kind wherein, they can celebrate.

Talk to you soon.

Teacher Nina


Around the world, a lot of people celebrate Christmas each December 25, while many others celebrate the birthday of Jesus Christ on January 7.

>> Did you mean: Around the world, a lot of people celebrate Christmas on December 25, while others celebrate the birthday of Jesus Christ on January 7.

However, there are also millions who choose not to celebrate Christmas at all.

>> correct

Why?

>> correct

For one thing, they may belong to a religion that is not part of Christendom.

>> correct

>> OR: The reason might be, they don\'t belong to a religion that is not part of Christendom.

They may be of the Jewish, Hindu, or Shinto faith, to name a few.

>> correct 

Others, such as atheists, agnostics, or secular humanists, view the Christmas story as a myth.

>> correct

>> OR: Others, such as atheist, agnostics or secular humanists believe that Christmas story as a myth.

There are also people who are in a difficult situation financially or physically so that where they are not afford emotionally to celebrate or enjoy Christmas.

>>  Did you mean: There are also people who are in difficult situation financially or physically, so they can\'t afford to celebrate or enjoy Christmas.

>> OR: There are also people who are in a difficult situation financially or physically so. they can\'t afford emotionally to celebrate or enjoy Christmas.

Their family could be in a hospital fighting diseases or they are literally starving.

If you or your family is at a risk of dying today or tomorrow, it is miserable to see people on TV or on the street, laughing and smiling.

>> correct

Although I doubt whether I can survive today, the world is going well without me.

>> correct

Nothing will happen in the world even if I do not exist.

>> correct

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