Do you ever think that some music is just noise?
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Hello Ye [이름],
You made a good point about music and noise. Music can make us happy and relaxed, but as you said, it needs to be played at the right time and sound good. If it doesn\'t fit the moment or place, or if it sounds bad, it can be considered noise. It\'s important to think about when and where music is played, and how loud it is.
~Teacher Cathy
Yes.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Yes, I think that some music is just noise.
Music is something that gives us pleasure and sometimes comfort us.
>> Music is something that gives us pleasure and sometimes comforts us.
However, for music to play this role, it must approach the right moment with a good sound.
>>CORRECT
OR>>However, for music to fulfill this role effectively, it must come at the right moment with good sound.
Noise is an irregular mixture that makes unpleasant and noisy sounds dense.
>>Noise is a chaotic combination of sounds that create an unpleasant and loud density.
If the music feels noisy, I think it\'s noise.
>>If music is perceived as creating unpleasant, chaotic sounds, it can be categorized as noise.
When it comes to music, timing and location are always important.
>>CORRECT
OR>>In the context of music, timing and location are consistently crucial factors.
Music that doesn\'t fit where it rings in the library and music that doesn\'t match the decibel are music that can be felt as noise.
>>Music that is played inappropriately or at a volume that doesn\'t match the surroundings can be perceived as noise.
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