Do you ever think that some music is just noise?
학생이 쓴 원문
Sometimes I felt some music is too noisy, especially metal music.
Electric guitar in metal music is too agreessive(offensive).
That sounds hear very sharp.
So, I felt those music is noise sometimes.
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Sometimes I felt some music is too noisy, especially metal music.
>> Sometimes I feel that some music is too noisy, especially metal music.
Electric guitar in metal music is too agreessive(offensive).
>> The electric guitar in metal music sounds too aggressive and intense.
That sounds hear very sharp.
>> It has a very sharp sound.
So, I felt those music is noise sometimes.
>> So, I sometimes feel that this kind of music is just noise to me.
>> Sometimes I feel that some music is too noisy, especially metal music.
Electric guitar in metal music is too agreessive(offensive).
>> The electric guitar in metal music sounds too aggressive and intense.
That sounds hear very sharp.
>> It has a very sharp sound.
So, I felt those music is noise sometimes.
>> So, I sometimes feel that this kind of music is just noise to me.
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