Do you ever wish you could go back in time and be a little kid again?
학생이 쓴 원문
Sometimes I want to go back. Because I want to go back to my childhood memories. I once did it again because I remembered when I was young. For example, I watch cartoons or animations again, listen to old music, or go to the school I attended. Every time I do that, it reminds me of the old days and I miss it again. o I want to go back at least once if I can.
강사 첨삭
Hi Steve! Once in a while. we think about our childhood days. We remember the days when we were worry free, not that much responsibilities and everything was fun. If I was also given the chance, I would also like to go back just once. :)
Sometimes I want to go back. Because I want to go back to my childhood memories.
>> Sometimes I want to go back because of my childhood memories.
I once did it again because I remembered when I was young.
>> Every time I do those things again, I remember the times when I was still young.
For example, I watch cartoons or animations again, listen to old music, or go to the school I attended.
>>Like when I watch cartoons or animations , listen to old music, or go to the school I attended to before.
Every time I do that, it reminds me of the old days and I miss it again. o I want to go back at least once if I can.]
>>Every time I do that, it reminds me of the old days and I miss it again so I want to go back at least once if I can.
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