Do you ever wish you could go back in time and be a little kid again? Why yes or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
No,I don\'t. because when I was a kid, It was limited about what I could. If I choice when I go back in time exactly, I want to go back to 20. That moment is the happiest time of my entire life. I could drink with my friends every day and I also have high stamina. so even if I didn\'t sleep at all, I can enjoy with my friend until next day. but now if I do like 20, I\'ll be hospitalized.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Once in a while. we think about our childhood days. We remember the days when we were worry free, not that much responsibilities and everything was fun. If I was also given the chance, I would also like to go back just once but only in my 20\'s as well. hahahaha:)
No,I don\'t. because when I was a kid, It was limited about what I could.
>> No, I don\'t because when I was a kid, my actions were very limiter.
If I choice when I go back in time exactly, I want to go back to 20.
>> If I can choose, I want to go back when I was in my 20s.
That moment is the happiest time of my entire life.
>> Those moments are the happiest times of my life.
I could drink with my friends every day and I also have high stamina.
>> I could drink with my friends every day and I also had high stamina.
so even if I didn\'t sleep at all, I can enjoy with my friend until next day. but now if I do like 20, I\'ll be hospitalized.
>> So even if I don\'t sleep at all, I can have a good friends until the next day. Although, if I do those things now, I will be hospitalized.
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