Do you ever wish you could go back in time and be a little kid again? Why yes or why not?

2021-04-27 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I have never wanted to go back in time and be a little kid again. I am satisfied with now a me. And so I do not want to go to back to a little child. If I go to back to a little kid, I can not do any sports that I am playing with my friends. And I can not enjoy with now my friends. And my parents want to go to back to a little child, but I want to be a grown up. That\'s why I do not want to go back in time and be a little child again.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Once in a while. we think about our childhood days. We remember the days when we were worry free, not that much responsibilities and everything was fun. If I was also given the chance, I would like to go back. We also have different perspectives.

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I have never wanted to go back in time and be a little kid again.

>> I never want to go back to the time when I was still a kid.

I am satisfied with now a me.

>> I am satisfied with my life right now so I don\'t want to go back.

And so I do not want to go to back to a little child.

>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

If I go to back to a little kid, I can not do any sports that I am playing with my friends.
>> If I will go back, I can\'t play sports and play with my friends.

And I can not enjoy with now my friends.

>> I can\'t enjoy with the friends that I have now as well.

And my parents want to go to back to a little child, but I want to be a grown up.

>> My parents also want me to be a little child again but I don\'t.

That\'s why I do not want to go back in time and be a little child again.

>> That\'s why I do not want to go back to the time when I was a kid again.

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