Do you ever worry about losing your friends?
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I thought the relationship with my friends would keep forever when I was a teenager because we didn\'t care economical status, occupation and academic background. As getting old, most people lose their old friends due to various reasons and meet new friends. There are a lot of events in people\'s lives such as wedding, having babies and getting a job. Some friends of mine didn\'t want to hang out if they didn\'t get a job because they worried of how their friends thought about them. I would like to be a friend with someone who has same interests with me. If people have different interests, it is really difficult to have a conversation for a long time because there aren\'t many subjects that we talk about. It is ok to have few friends for me, if we understand fully each other. How many friends I have isn\'t important, but if I have a soulmate, I would have a relationship with them forever. Since SNS were launched, people want to make friends as many as possible.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!^^
People change as they say.
As we get older, our priorities, careers and things we like change.
I don\'t actually have a lot of friends so I treasure them.
Losing people on the way is okay.
They will always be part of our lives.
And, we, became parts of their lives too.
Andrea
I thought the relationship with my friends would keep forever when I was a teenager because we didn\'t care economical status, occupation and academic background.
>> I thought the relationship between me and my friends would last forever when I was a teenage because we didn\'t care about the economical status, occupation and academic background.
As getting old, most people lose their old friends due to various reasons and meet new friends.
>> As we get old, most people lose their old friends due to various reasons and meet new friends.
There are a lot of events in people\'s lives such as wedding, having babies and getting a job.
>> Correct
Some friends of mine didn\'t want to hang out if they didn\'t get a job because they worried of how their friends thought about them.
>> Some friends of mine didn\'t want to hang out if they didn\'t get a job because they are worried of how their friends prejudices.
I would like to be a friend with someone who has same interests with me.
>> Correct
If people have different interests, it is really difficult to have a conversation for a long time because there aren\'t many subjects that we talk about.
>> Correct
It is ok to have few friends for me, if we understand fully each other.
>> It is okay to have few friends for me as long as we fully understand each other.
How many friends I have isn\'t important, but if I have a soulmate, I would have a relationship with them forever.
>> The number of my friends is not important, but if I have soulmates, I would have a relationship with them forever.
Since SNS were launched, people want to make friends as many as possible.
>> Correct
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