Do you exercise regulary? why? why not?

2012-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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I had regularly exercised before a monthe and I had usually exercised from 6:00am to 7:00am. But now I cannot exercise. Because it is very hard to get out from my bed the weather more and more cold. So I usually sleep in place of exercise. Suppose a people more sleep and more fainaigue when the weather grow cold. If the morning was warm, I would have exercised continue. But a morning is very cold. Two monthe later will be warm. And I will retry to exercise so I will be diligence people.

강사 첨삭

Happy Wednesday! Thank you for sharing your idea! :) Here are some corrections. \"Practice makes perfect.\" I hope you enjoy our class tomorrow. Take care. Good night! -T. Ritchel I had regularly exercised before a monthe and I had usually exercised from 6:00am to 7:00am.>> I exercise regularly from 6 a.m to 7 a.m last month. But now I cannot exercise. >> But now I don\'t exercise.Because it is very hard to get out from my bed the weather more and more cold.>> It\'s very hard to get out of bed because the weather is getting colder. So I usually sleep in place of exercise. >> So I sleep instead.Suppose a people more sleep and more fainaigue when the weather grow cold. >> People become more sleepy when the weather is cold.If the morning was warm, I would have exercised continue. >> I would continue exercising if it\'s warm in the morning.But a morning is very cold. >> But it\'s very cold.Two monthe later will be warm. >> After 2 months, it will be warm again. And I will retry to exercise so I will be diligence people. >> I will start exercising again so I will be a diligent person.

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