Do you exercise regulary? why? why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I had regularly exercised before a monthe and I had usually exercised from 6:00am to 7:00am.
But now I cannot exercise.
Because it is very hard to get out from my bed the weather more and more cold.
So I usually sleep in place of exercise.
Suppose a people more sleep and more fainaigue when the weather grow cold.
If the morning was warm, I would have exercised continue.
But a morning is very cold.
Two monthe later will be warm. And I will retry to exercise so I will be diligence people.
강사 첨삭
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\"Practice makes perfect.\"
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-T. Ritchel
I had regularly exercised before a monthe and I had usually exercised from 6:00am to 7:00am.>> I exercise regularly from 6 a.m to 7 a.m last month.
But now I cannot exercise.
>> But now I don\'t exercise.Because it is very hard to get out from my bed the weather more and more cold.>> It\'s very hard to get out of bed because the weather is getting colder.
So I usually sleep in place of exercise.
>> So I sleep instead.Suppose a people more sleep and more fainaigue when the weather grow cold.
>> People become more sleepy when the weather is cold.If the morning was warm, I would have exercised continue.
>> I would continue exercising if it\'s warm in the morning.But a morning is very cold.
>> But it\'s very cold.Two monthe later will be warm.
>> After 2 months, it will be warm again.
And I will retry to exercise so I will be diligence people.
>> I will start exercising again so I will be a diligent person.
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