Do you express your disappointment to someone?
학생이 쓴 원문
I try not to show negative emotions as much as I can, but friends around me say I can express my disappointment to someone by the look on my face even though I say nothing. I like people and relieve stress by hanging out with them, I think interpersonal relationships are important to me. So I don\'t set high expectations for others in the first place to reduce the negative emotions that can be revealed on my face.
강사 첨삭
Good day [이름]! Did you know that your eyes are the window to your soul? People who knew you understand your feelings even without saying anything at all.
~Aki :)
I try not to show negative emotions as much as I can, but friends around me say I can express my disappointment to someone by the look on my face even though I say nothing.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> I try to conceal negative emotions as possible a I can, but people who knew me well are able to notice how I show my disappointment by the look on my face even when I say nothing at all.
I like people and relieve stress by hanging out with them, I think interpersonal relationships are important to me.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> I like hanging out with people, way of releasing my stress, For me, social relationships are important.
So I don\'t set high expectations for others in the first place to reduce the negative emotions that can be revealed on my face.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> Thus, I don\'t put high expectation to other people to lessen negative emotions that might revealed on my face.
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