Do you feel bad after you have an argument?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I don\'t like to argue with someone. Normally, I accept the opinin that someone insist me.
but I feel bad when he insist unreasonable request to me.
I changed my company 7 times. 4 times of them, I changed because of arguement.
They request unreasonable situations, and I rejected their requests and I resigned after arguement.
they were a senior managers, boss, line of boss.
I don\'t like to make a black money. I always did my best. I want to get the incentive according to my sales amounts.
but they gave the incentive money to their\'s line people. that was very unreasonable sitaution.
So, I moved to another company. but the same as usual like a before company.
Now, I found last company without unreasonable reqeusts and unfairness.
강사 첨삭
Good day [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. Keep up the good work.
Here are your corrections:
I don\'t like to argue with someone.
>> CORRECT
Normally, I accept the opinin that someone insist me.
>> Normally, I accept the opinion of others.
>> But I feel bad when he insists his unreasonable request to me.
>> CORRECT
4 times of them, I changed because of arguement.
>> 4 of them was because of an argument.
>> They request for unreasonable situations, and I rejected their requests. After arguing, I resigned.
>> They were senior managers, a boss, and line of bosses.
>> I don\'t like to make black money.
I always did my best.
>> CORRECT
I want to get the incentive according to my sales amounts.
>> I want to get the incentive according to my sales.
>> But they gave the incentive money to their line\'s people.
that was very unreasonable sitaution.
>> That was an unreasonable situation.
>> CORRECT
but the same as usual like a before company.
>> But it was the same as the last company.
>> Now, I found the company without unreasonable requests and unfairness.
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