Do you feel bad after you have an argument?

2020-08-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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Dear [Name], I don\'t like to argue with someone. Normally, I accept the opinin that someone insist me. but I feel bad when he insist unreasonable request to me. I changed my company 7 times. 4 times of them, I changed because of arguement. They request unreasonable situations, and I rejected their requests and I resigned after arguement. they were a senior managers, boss, line of boss. I don\'t like to make a black money. I always did my best. I want to get the incentive according to my sales amounts. but they gave the incentive money to their\'s line people. that was very unreasonable sitaution. So, I moved to another company. but the same as usual like a before company. Now, I found last company without unreasonable reqeusts and unfairness.

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Here are your corrections:

Dear [Name],

I don\'t like to argue with someone. 
>> CORRECT

Normally, I accept the opinin that someone insist me.
>> Normally, I accept the opinion of others.

but I feel bad when he insist unreasonable request to me.
>> But I feel bad when he insists his unreasonable request to me.

I changed my company 7 times. 
>> CORRECT

4 times of them, I changed because of arguement.
>> 4 of them was because of an argument.

They request unreasonable situations, and I rejected their requests and I resigned after arguement.
>> They request for unreasonable situations, and I rejected their requests. After arguing, I resigned.

they were a senior managers, boss, line of boss.
>> They were senior managers, a boss, and line of bosses.

I don\'t like to make a black money. 
>> I don\'t like to make black money.

I always did my best. 
>> CORRECT

I want to get the incentive according to my sales amounts.
>> I want to get the incentive according to my sales.

but they gave the incentive money to their\'s line people. 
>> But they gave the incentive money to their line\'s people. 

that was very unreasonable sitaution.
>> That was an unreasonable situation.

So, I moved to another company. 
>> CORRECT

but the same as usual like a before company.
>> But it was the same as the last company.

Now, I found last company without unreasonable reqeusts and unfairness.
>> Now, I found the company without unreasonable requests and unfairness.

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