Do you feel different because of the weather? How do different types of weather affect your emotions
학생이 쓴 원문
The feelings the weather gives depend on my mood.
The rain that falls when I feel good looks beautiful,The rain that falls when the mood is not good can be annoying.
If the weather is good, the intention to go outside is We can see how much the weather is affecting us.
These days weather was good for a few days, but the vegetation waited for the rain
The rain that rained all day moistened the earth and seemed to give us hope.
The vegetation and our minds seeing rain were refreshing.
In Korea, where there are four seasons, each season has feel different emotions.
The emotions that spring, summer, autumn, and winter give us are so beautiful.
I Enjoy my heart every season with all my heart.
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The feelings the weather gives depend on my mood.
>>CORRECT!
The rain that falls when I feel good looks beautiful,The rain that falls when the mood is not good can be annoying.
The rain that falls when I feel good looks beautiful,The rain that falls when the mood is not good can be annoying.
>>The rain that falls when I feel good looks beautiful but at the same time the rain that falls when the mood is not good can be annoying.
If the weather is good, the intention to go outside is We can see how much the weather is affecting us.
If the weather is good, the intention to go outside is We can see how much the weather is affecting us.
>>If the weather is good, the intention to go outside so we can see how much the weather is affecting us.
These days weather was good for a few days, but the vegetation waited for the rain
These days weather was good for a few days, but the vegetation waited for the rain
>>These days the weather had been good for a few days, but the vegetation waited for the rain
The rain that rained all day moistened the earth and seemed to give us hope.
The rain that rained all day moistened the earth and seemed to give us hope.
>>The rain that poured all day moistened the earth and seemed to give us hope.
The vegetation and our minds seeing rain were refreshing.
The vegetation and our minds seeing rain were refreshing.
>>The vegetation was refreshed as well as our minds when we saw the rain.
In Korea, where there are four seasons, each season has feel different emotions.
In Korea, where there are four seasons, each season has feel different emotions.
>>In Korea, there are four seasons, each season makes us feel different emotions.
The emotions that spring, summer, autumn, and winter give us are so beautiful.
The emotions that spring, summer, autumn, and winter give us are so beautiful.
>>CORRECT!
I Enjoy my heart every season with all my heart.
I Enjoy my heart every season with all my heart.
>>I enjoy every season with all my heart.
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