Do you feel it’s hard to say no when someone wants to visit?
학생이 쓴 원문
No, I feel it’s not hard to say that because I have a clear reason.
The reason is right that my wife doesn’t like that.
My home is always a mess due to children so we can easily invite someone.
Many parents who have children in Korea generally understand this situation.
So we made a rule meet people outside instead
강사 첨삭
Hi Joey, you answered this in a very honest and thoughtful way, and I appreciate how clearly you explained your situation. I made a few corrections to improve the natural flow of the sentences. For example, “The reason is right that” isn’t needed, so I changed it to “The reason is that,” which is more natural. I also corrected “we can easily invite someone” to “we can’t easily invite someone,” since the meaning of your idea shows the opposite. These adjustments help your writing sound smoother and clearer.
I really appreciate how you always give long, sincere answers. You express yourself deeply, and it makes your writing meaningful and enjoyable to read.
~ T. Lia
No, I feel it’s not hard to say that because I have a clear reason.
>> CORRECT
The reason is right that my wife doesn’t like that.
>> The reason is that my wife doesn’t like that.
My home is always a mess due to children so we can easily invite someone.
>> My home is always a mess due to the children, so we can’t easily invite someone.
Many parents who have children in Korea generally understand this situation.
>> CORRECT
So we made a rule meet people outside instead.
>> So we made a rule to meet people outside instead.
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