Do you feel sad when you add one year to your age on your birthday? Why or why not?
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No, I feel more mature every year I get older and move on to chapter 2 of my life, so I have no fear or sadness about getting older.
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Do you feel sad when you add one year to your age on your birthday?
Why or why not?
No, I feel more mature every year I get older and move on to chapter 2 of my life, so I have no fear or sadness about getting older.
>>> No, I feel more mature every year as I get older and move on to the next chapter of my life. So that is why I have no fear or sadness about getting older.
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