Do you feel that you have sufficient time to do everything you need every day? If not, how could you

2016-08-03 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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The important thing is how to manage time given to us more effectively. It is fair that everyone has 24 hours a day regardless of his/her social status or wealth. At a time, we may complain about insufficient time to do something. However, in many cases, we often kill time without using it in a productive way. We think numerous brand new days will come again and again forever and we can procrastinate and do it tomorrow. Thinking about our whole life, was the lack of time a real reason for not achieving something you wished to accomplish? Weren’t your lack of will and weak determination real problems? Before you go to bed, think about how you spent your day. Did you live your day to the fullest? Time could be more precious than anything else. We cannot buy or borrow time that has already passed. It doesn’t matter how rich you are, you cannot bring your youth back. Depending on your time management and well planning, you can use a day as if it is 48 hours or 36 hours.

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Hi there Sir [이름].Time is gold. I always keep in mind what you said before, \"Live your life as if it is your last day\". We should spend time with our family and friends. Especially with our parents, we cannot bring back time. Thanks for reminding the importance of time to me. See you in class. Teacher Nina   The important thing is how to manage time given to us more effectively. >> correct It is fair that everyone has 24 hours a day regardless of his/her social status or wealth. >> correct At a time, we may complain about insufficient time to do something. >> correct However, in many cases, we often kill time without using it in a productive way. >> correct We think numerous brand new days will come again and again forever and we can procrastinate and do it tomorrow. >> Better: We think numerous brand new days will come again and again forever. We can procrastinate and do it tomorrow. Thinking about our whole life, was the lack of time a real reason for not achieving something you wished to accomplish? >> Thinking about our whole life, lack of time is the real reason for not achieving something you wished to accomplish? Weren’t your lack of will and weak determination real problems? >> Weren’t your lack of will and weak determination the real problems? Before you go to bed, think about how you spent your day. >> correct Did you live your day to the fullest? >> correct Time could be more precious than anything else. >> correct We cannot buy or borrow time that has already passed. >> correct It doesn’t matter how rich you are, you cannot bring your youth back. >> correct Depending on your time management and well planning, you can use a day as if it is 48 hours or 36 hours. >> correct

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