Do you feel that you have to work hard and be miserable now in order to be happy later?

2014-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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It couldn’t be better if we can balance things and enjoy every moment that we have. Is it really possible for us to enjoy life now and at the same time preparing for the future? Can we get up and go to work every morning without being pressured or stressed out? No, we all work hard now for better future. Even after getting a job, you need to study to enhance your skills and competences for career prospects. Young students study for more than 10 hours day. Do they like studying? No, they are preparing for their future. If I were offered to choose either rather being miserable now or being happy now and miserable later, I would go for the latter. I firmly believe that we need to sacrifice something to have a better life in the future. In order to be rich, you have to save money now. You need to prepare for a rainy day. Who doesn't like going on vacations, eating delicious food and enjoying life? We cannot have everythihg. This is life. No pain, No gain.

강사 첨삭

You\'re absolutely right Sir [이름]!We really need to work hard for a bright future. Some people give up because of the problems that they encounter. We should be strong and determined to reach our goals. Thank you for inspiring me more.^^ See you!Teacher Nina   It couldn’t be better if we can balance things and enjoy every moment that we have. >> Correct! Is it really possible for us to enjoy life now and at the same time preparing for the future? >> Correct! Can we get up and go to work every morning without being pressured or stressed out? >> Correct! No, we all work hard now for better future. >> No, we all work hard now for a better future. Even after getting a job, you need to study to enhance your skills and competences for career prospects. >> Correct! Young students study for more than 10 hours day. >> Young students study for more than ten hours a day. Do they like studying? >> Correct! No, they are preparing for their future. >> Correct! If I were offered to choose either rather being miserable now or being happy now and miserable later, I would go for the latter. >> Correct! I firmly believe that we need to sacrifice something to have a better life in the future. >> Correct! In order to be rich, you have to save money now. >> Correct! You need to prepare for a rainy day. >> Correct! >> OR: You need to prepare for rainy days. Who doesn\'t like going on vacations, eating delicious food and enjoying life? >> Correct! We cannot have everythihg. >> Correct! ( Spelling check: everything ^^) This is life. No pain, No gain. >> In this life, no pain no gain.

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