Do you find advertising persuasive? Answer in 5 to 10 sentences.
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I think that most of advertisements do not have persuasive impact.
>>> I think that most of the advertisements do not have persuasive impact.
In my case, when it is not necessary to perchase something, I really don\'t mind even the merchandisers promote their product desperately.
>>> In my case, when it is not necessary to purchase something, I really don\'t mind even if the merchandisers promote their product desperately.
But some advertisements have quite influential effect.
>>> correct
For example, cosmetic promotion with beloved actress could make us buy them even when people don\'t need them.
>>> For example, cosmetic promotion with beloved actresses could make us buy them even if people don\'t really need them.
And some prominent advertisement of megacompany or multinational cooperation influence people\'s mind all over the world and around the clock.
>>> And some prominent advertisement of mega companies or multi- national cooperation influence people\'s mind all over the world and around the clock.
Exposure of the MacDonald ad makes us imagine the tipical image of hamburgar of there, when we bring to mind \'Hamburger\'.
>>> Exposure of the Mcdonald\'s ad makes us imagine the typical image of a hamburger and we have that in our thoughts.
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