Do you find \"competent workers\" as a threat to you?
학생이 쓴 원문
I love to work with \"competent workers\". Because they can be a positive stimulus to me and a new motivation. I think it\'s better to meet these high-potential employees and develop each other while maintaining proper competitiveness than to live complacently with incapable employees. Also, these employees are a spring that benefits me in the macro version, because they are sure to help the company’s success.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday [이름]! I like the way you foresee competent workers.
~Aki :)
I love to work with \"competent workers\". Because they can be a positive stimulus to me and a new motivation.
>> I love to work with \"competent workers\". Because they can be a positive stimulus to me and new motivation.
I think it\'s better to meet these high-potential employees and develop each other while maintaining proper competitiveness than to live complacently with incapable employees.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> I honestly believe that working with these high-potential workers develop and maintain healthy competitiveness than working with incompetent workers.
Also, these employees are a spring that benefits me in the macro version because they are sure to help the company’s success.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> Moreover, these kinds of workers are the source that aids me in the business environment because they are a sure asset to the success of the company.
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