Do you find it convenient to order food online? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am very satisfied with the online order service.
I can think about the menu freely, so I always use the online service when I order food.
Also, it is very convenient because I can order with a few touches.
I can save my time.
In addition, I can order wherever even in public places.
Likewise, there are a lot of conveniences of using online food service.
강사 첨삭
Hello Chloe!
Here are the corrections.
I am very satisfied with the online order service. I can think about the menu freely, so I always use the online service when I order food.
>> Correct!
Also, it is very convenient because I can order with a few touches. I can save my time.
>>Also, it is very convenient because I can order with few touches. I can save my time.
In addition, I can order wherever even in public places. Likewise, there are a lot of conveniences of using online food service.
>> Correct!
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