Do you find politics boring? What makes it boring?
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We can get to know about the latest financial and economical situation around the world through accessing politics on TV and newspaper. This is true that knowing politics help people to broden their horizon and develop intelligence. Nonetheless, most of people argue that politics is boring. The main reason is that politics does not contain someone\' experiences and lessons. Especially for student, they prefer to read fashion magazines and comic books rather than politics newspapers due to a monotonous tone and expert words of politics. Parents tend to explain politics easily to the children with their experiences. It can attract children to be interested in politics for a moment but children turned out to be sleepy and bored soon. This is because politics handle deep and complicated subjects that people are not familiar with and can not understand without specialized knowledge.
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Thank you once again for this Kasey. Have a great weekend!
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This is true that knowing politics help people to broden their horizon and develop intelligence.
>>> It is true that knowing politics helps people to broaden their horizon and develop intelligence.
Nonetheless, most of people argue that politics is boring.
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The main reason is that politics does not contain someone\' experiences and lessons.
>>> The main reason is that politics does not contain someone\'s experiences and lessons.
>>> OR: The main reason is not everyone can relate their experiences and lessons in politics.
Especially for student, they prefer to read fashion magazines and comic books rather than politics newspapers due to a monotonous tone and expert words of politics.
>>> Especially for students, they prefer to read fashion magazines and comic books rather than politics newspapers due to a monotonous tone and complex words of politics.
Parents tend to explain politics easily to the children with their experiences.
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It can attract children to be interested in politics for a moment but children turned out to be sleepy and bored soon.
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This is because politics handle deep and complicated subjects that people are not familiar with and can not understand without specialized knowledge.
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