Do you follow all of your country’s traditional customs? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am following my contry\'s traditional customs. It\'s because I think I can understand the people\'s mind more if I follow the traditional customs. Specially older than me. If not, I have some trobles with another people because I cannot understand why they think about somethings.
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It\'s great reading your composition. ^^
Please check the corrections~
It\'s great reading your composition. ^^
Please check the corrections~
Keep it up!
- T. Rina
1. I am following my contry\'s traditional customs.
>> I am following my country\'s traditional customs.
2. It\'s because I think I can understand the people\'s mind more if I follow the traditional customs.
>> It\'s because I think I can understand people\'s minds more if I follow the traditional customs.
3. Specially older than me.
>> Specially to those who are older than me.
4. If not, I have some trobles with another people because I cannot understand why they think about somethings.
>> If not, I will have some troubles with other people because I cannot understand why they think about some things.
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