Do you give money to beggars or homeless people? Why or why not?

2019-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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no because i don\'t have enough money to donate them.. and also there are lots of company to help to donate. but i saw articles that actually they don\'t give to homeless people just spend the money for them like embezzlement. but when i was middle and high school student i have donated to them using by unicef. so if i get the chance for volunteering for them, i will do that!

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Hello [이름]! You are indeed a girl with a golden heart. ~

Thank you for sending your homework.

See you! ~T. Elisha

no because i don\'t have enough money to donate them..

>> No, because I don\'t have enough money to be able to donate to them.
 and also there are lots of company to help to donate.

>> Also, there are many companies who support them.
 but i saw articles that actually they don\'t give to homeless people just spend the money for them like embezzlement.
>>I saw some articles which say that they don\'t actually use the money to help homeless people but instead, they embezzle the money.
 but when i was middle and high school student i have donated to them using by unicef.

>> But when I was in middle school and high school,  have donated to them through UNICEF.
 so if i get the chance for volunteering for them, i will do that!

>> So if I get a chance to volunteer, I will do that.

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