Do you give money to beggars or homeless people? Why or why not?
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Before, I gave money to beggars or homeless people, but now I stop doing this.
>>> Before I give money to beggars or homeless people, but now I no longer do it.
During my trip in Europe, I met a lot of those people.
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I sometimes gave charity to them, but I felt skeptical as well.
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One day, one of my friends told me that the money isn\'t helpful to them, because it can only help them just for a while.
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He said, they can also spend the money on drugs and alcohol, so it is much helpful to give them foods.
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After this experience, I stop doing this temporary aid.
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Although I don\'t donate them groceries, but I sometimes buy magazines of them.
>>> Although I don\'t donate groceries to them, I sometimes buy magazines from them.
The name of the magazine is \'Big Issue\'
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It is a well-known project to helping homeless people and with it they can work as a part of our society.
>>> It is a well- known project for helping homeless people and with it they can work as a part of our society.
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