Do you give money to homeless people? Do you think people should give money to homeless people?
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I don\'t give money to homeless people. It\'s because there are places for homeless people in Korea. If they want to go to the places to stay some days, they can go. Even If I give money to homeless people, the money won\'t be a good solution for them. In my opinion, making a fund is better than giving money. After establishing the fund, people can donate to the fund. We should make a plan for homeless people. If I give money to homeless people, the money will help homeless people to stay on the street.
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Your essay today is impressive. You\'ve created a lot of good sentences and I\'m really happy about it.
Keep it up!
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~Teacher Charry
Your essay today is impressive. You\'ve created a lot of good sentences and I\'m really happy about it.
Keep it up!
See you in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry
>> CORRECT!
It\'s because there are places for homeless people in Korea.
>> CORRECT!
If they want to go to the places to stay some days, they can go.
>> If they need a temporary shelter, they can go to those places.
Even If I give money to homeless people, the money won\'t be a good solution for them.
>> CORRECT!
In my opinion, making a fund is better than giving money.
>> In my opinion, starting a fund raising program is better than giving money.
After establishing the fund, people can donate to the fund.
>> After establishing a fund raising program, people can donate in it.
We should make a plan for homeless people.
>> CORRECT!
If I give money to homeless people, the money will help homeless people to stay on the street.
>> CORRECT!
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