Do you give to charity or volunteer? Should rich people and corporations be forced to give donation
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I think donation or volunteer work is not duty, just choice.
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Because time or money of people is their private property.
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We don’t usually blame our friends to buy clothes because it is friends’ right how to spend their property.
>>We don’t usually blame our friends to buy clothes because it is friends’ right how to spend their money.
Likewise, we don’t have the right to blame whether some rich people or corporations spend their money or time for somebody.
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However, it is also true China needs support.
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Korea don’t have fatality yet because we have proper disease control system.
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We found and isolated infected person at the beginning and we are tracking every way to have possibility infected.
>>We found and isolated infected person at the beginning and we are tracking every way to find possible infected people.
Also, through high quality of medical system we are curing patients before becoming pneumonia.
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Isolation early and curing before becoming pneumonia is important.
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For solving this problem, they need facilities and medical workers.
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It also needs a lot of money.
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Thus, China needs support of every form from other countries or individuals.
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