Do you have a favorite actor? What makes him/her your favorite?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like Korean male actor \'jinwook lee\'. I like him because of his appearance, frankly speaking.
I became his fan through one movie when I was a middle school student. At that time, I haven\'t ever thought attractive seeing the man. But he was very handsome in the movie. In short, I was into jinwook lee with this movie as a momentum. So I started to search the work that he participate. He was turned out to be a famous actor in romantic comedy genre. I find my ideal type through him. I was genuine fan of him during several years. But as I became a test-taker, I lacked time to watch his work, so he became out of my mind naturally.
However, I heard very shocking new about him. That was his scandal with one actress. Much surprising fact was, the opponent was my favorite actress, hyojin gong. She is famous for acting ability. Her chacacter in every work is always charming for me. So I was very happy to they become a couple. Eventhough they broke up several years ago.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. I literally searched Jinwook Lee in Google after reading this. I know him and have seen him in some Korean dramas. He does look handsome.
- T. Beth
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I like Korean male actor \'jinwook lee\'. >>> correct
I like him because of his appearance, frankly speaking.
>>> correct
I became his fan through one movie when I was a middle school student.
I became his fan through one movie when I was a middle school student.
>>> correct
At that time, I haven\'t ever thought attractive seeing the man.
>>> At that time, I haven\'t ever thought of seeing men attractive.
>>> OR: At that time, I didn\'t even feel attracted when I see men.
But he was very handsome in the movie.
>>> correct
In short, I was into jinwook lee with this movie as a momentum.
>>> In short, I was into Jinwook Lee in this movie as a momentum.
So I started to search the work that he participate.
>>> So I started to search for other works that he participated in.
He was turned out to be a famous actor in romantic comedy genre.
>>> He turned out to be a famous actor in romantic comedy genre.
I find my ideal type through him.
>>> I found my ideal type through him.
I was genuine fan of him during several years.
>>> I was a genuine fan of him for several years.
But as I became a test-taker, I lacked time to watch his work, so he became out of my mind naturally.
>>> correct
However, I heard very shocking new about him.
>>> However, I heard a very shocking news about him.
That was his scandal with one actress.
>>> correct
Much surprising fact was, the opponent was my favorite actress, hyojin gong.
>>> correct
She is famous for acting ability.
>>> She is famous for her acting ability.
Her chacacter in every work is always charming for me.
>>> Her character in every work she has done is always charming for me.
So I was very happy to they become a couple.
>>> So I was very happy that they became a couple.
Eventhough they broke up several years ago.
>>> Although they broke up several years ago.
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