Do you have a favorite restaurant? What kind of food do they serve?
학생이 쓴 원문
I love eating sushi.
My husband and I tried to find the best sushi restaurant.
We have a criterion to evaluate it.
First, the amount of rice has to be appropriate and the fish should not to big.
Second, we evaluate the cost-effectiveness.
Even if it is delicious, we won\'t go to the restaurant if it is too expensive.
Anyway, there is a sushi restaurant where we go often near my house.
We sometimes go there when we wanna eat fresh dish.
강사 첨삭
Hello Rin. Thank you once again.
- T. Beth
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I love eating sushi.>>> correct
My husband and I tried to find the best sushi restaurant.
My husband and I tried to find the best sushi restaurant.
>>> correct.
We have a criterion to evaluate it.
>>> correct
First, the amount of rice has to be appropriate and the fish should not to big.
First, the amount of rice has to be appropriate and the fish should not to big.
>>> First, the amount of rice has to be appropriate and the fish should not be to big.
Second, we evaluate the cost-effectiveness.
Second, we evaluate the cost-effectiveness.
>>> correct
Even if it is delicious, we won\'t go to the restaurant if it is too expensive.
Even if it is delicious, we won\'t go to the restaurant if it is too expensive.
>>> correct
Anyway, there is a sushi restaurant where we go often near my house.
Anyway, there is a sushi restaurant where we go often near my house.
>>> correct
We sometimes go there when we wanna eat fresh dish.
We sometimes go there when we wanna eat fresh dish.
>>> correct
>>> OR: We sometimes go there when we wanna eat fresh dishes.
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