Do you have a favorite room in your home? Which room do you like most and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I have a favorite room in my home. I like my room the most. Because when I\'m in my room, no one comes in easily, and when I\'m alone in my room, I feel comfortable. If I stay in my room and close the door, my family can\'t see what I\'m doing and the sound is blocked.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Yes, I have a favorite room in my home.
>>> CORRECT!
I like my room the most.
>>> CORRECT!
Because when I\'m in my room, no one comes in easily, and when I\'m alone in my room, I feel comfortable.
>>> CORRECT!
If I stay in my room and close the door, my family can\'t see what I\'m doing and the sound is blocked.
>>> CORRECT!
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