Do you have a fidget spinner?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I remember. I saw a lot of kids playing with it.
My children liked it, too.
After that, there was slime as a similar thing.
Slime is sticky, but I don\'t know why many kids like it.
Children seem to like something to touch.
강사 첨삭
Hi So Hui!^^
My children liked it, too.
I only had one fidget spinner.
It is even the most classic one.
It was given to me by someone whom I can\'t remember.. haha
Andrea
Yes, I remember. I saw a lot of kids playing with it.
>> Yes, I remember a fidget spinner, a lot of kids play with it.
My children liked it, too.
>> Correct
After that, there was slime as a similar thing.
>> After that, there was slime as a similar thing.
Slime is sticky, but I don\'t know why many kids like it.
>> Correct
Children seem to like something to touch.
>> Correct
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